Sync Visuals with Audio
This is really cool (both song and animation/artwork), but it would have been much better and more interesting if you had synced the visuals up with the music. Still very cool though. Wish I could watch this with Lucy.
The animation and artwork was subpar, as was the audio (for the most part). I feel like it would've been funnier if the artwork, animation, and audio were improved. The humor itself was okay (although hindered by the poor quality of everything in general) but it could use touching-up as well. Good effort.
Could be so much better...
The artwork and animation is good. It's a style I'm not particularly fond of, but it's still good. The audio is mediocre. The voice acting is pretty bad, and combined with the terrible dialogue, an autistic symphony of fail is produced every time a character opens his mouth. The jokes are all very bland. I didn't laugh once. I didn't even crack a smile. I'm not a hardass when it comes to reviewing either, but when I watch something that's been placed on the front page, I expect it to be much better than this. Work on writing and voice acting, and this will be much more enjoyable. Also, work on spelling. The subtitles looked like they were written by an 8 year old. Sorry if this seems mean, I guess it kind of is, but I'm tired of stuff like this being put on the front page. With improvements in audio/writing, this could be awesome. Until then it's just another sub-par comedy series on ye olde Newgrounds.
Now this is my kind of Christmas cartoon.
An egg sandwhich with ham is worth starting a war over.
I've watched this many, many times, and it's always amazing.
This was awesome. Great animation. Nice Konata/Kagami scene xD
The artwork and animation in this is awesome, and the voice acting is pretty damn good too. Nice Flash. Now I'm off to go suck down some sweet, sweet ash.
I can't believe people are rating this low because of the gay content in the video. This is actually animated better than The Ultimate Showdown, although are both are funny. If you have a problem watching this video because of all the gay sex, then you're probably trying to resist some homo-erotic urge. Then again, if you watch this entire video and get a hard-on, you're succumbing to said homo-erotic urge. Lewl.
Not Very Original
The animation, artwork, dialogue, and script were all very unoriginal. Two teenage brothers fighting in an anime-inspired style. The animation that was present of the actual characters wasn't very good. The effects weren't too bad. The music was okay in certain parts, but I think could have been better. I found the entire flow of the animation to be lacking to front-page standards (although it seems to fit in well with some of the recent front-page submissions, *cough*shapes*cough). I can tell you have talent, but I think you should try to put more detail into the artwork and find a style for yourself.
It was done in paper, I cant manage so much detail. At this point im glad that, at least, my movie could reach the standard digital animation level.
I liked how the graphics and animation were simple, yet done well. The voice acting was pretty good and the sound quality wasn't too bad. This was funny and imaginative, well done.
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