RetardedSpiceBar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Something On My Face]

Sync Visuals with Audio

This is really cool (both song and animation/artwork), but it would have been much better and more interesting if you had synced the visuals up with the music. Still very cool though. Wish I could watch this with Lucy.

[I'm a PC: Deleted Clips]

Needs Improvement

The animation and artwork was subpar, as was the audio (for the most part). I feel like it would've been funnier if the artwork, animation, and audio were improved. The humor itself was okay (although hindered by the poor quality of everything in general) but it could use touching-up as well. Good effort.

Little-Rena responds:

Alright

[U: Submission Day]

Could be so much better...

The artwork and animation is good. It's a style I'm not particularly fond of, but it's still good. The audio is mediocre. The voice acting is pretty bad, and combined with the terrible dialogue, an autistic symphony of fail is produced every time a character opens his mouth. The jokes are all very bland. I didn't laugh once. I didn't even crack a smile. I'm not a hardass when it comes to reviewing either, but when I watch something that's been placed on the front page, I expect it to be much better than this. Work on writing and voice acting, and this will be much more enjoyable. Also, work on spelling. The subtitles looked like they were written by an 8 year old. Sorry if this seems mean, I guess it kind of is, but I'm tired of stuff like this being put on the front page. With improvements in audio/writing, this could be awesome. Until then it's just another sub-par comedy series on ye olde Newgrounds.

[Grinch Who Touched Xmas!]

lols

Now this is my kind of Christmas cartoon.

[Theoden, Horsemaster]

So True

An egg sandwhich with ham is worth starting a war over.
I've watched this many, many times, and it's always amazing.

[Cooking Sama]

Vurry Good

This was awesome. Great animation. Nice Konata/Kagami scene xD

[Tobacco Man]

Pretty Sweet

The artwork and animation in this is awesome, and the voice acting is pretty damn good too. Nice Flash. Now I'm off to go suck down some sweet, sweet ash.

[The Last Fight]

Not Very Original

The animation, artwork, dialogue, and script were all very unoriginal. Two teenage brothers fighting in an anime-inspired style. The animation that was present of the actual characters wasn't very good. The effects weren't too bad. The music was okay in certain parts, but I think could have been better. I found the entire flow of the animation to be lacking to front-page standards (although it seems to fit in well with some of the recent front-page submissions, *cough*shapes*cough). I can tell you have talent, but I think you should try to put more detail into the artwork and find a style for yourself.

keepwalking responds:

It was done in paper, I cant manage so much detail. At this point im glad that, at least, my movie could reach the standard digital animation level.

[Sometimes, y]

LOLOLOLOL

I liked how the graphics and animation were simple, yet done well. The voice acting was pretty good and the sound quality wasn't too bad. This was funny and imaginative, well done.

[Weather Man]

Could Use Some Improvement

The animation isn't bad, but there could have been more of it (e.g. you could have animated the clips of the characters laughing, which would have added more energy to the animation as a whole). The graphics weren't bad, seemed fine to me. The audio quality was rather poor though. I suggest that the voice actors obtain better mics (or use better recording software). The voice acting itself was okay in some places, but at other times it felt sub par. It was also pretty funny, especially once it reached the snow part. Overally, an average animation.