RetardedSpiceBar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'm a PC: Deleted Clips]

Needs Improvement

The animation and artwork was subpar, as was the audio (for the most part). I feel like it would've been funnier if the artwork, animation, and audio were improved. The humor itself was okay (although hindered by the poor quality of everything in general) but it could use touching-up as well. Good effort.

Little-Renastair responds:

Alright

[The Last Fight]

Not Very Original

The animation, artwork, dialogue, and script were all very unoriginal. Two teenage brothers fighting in an anime-inspired style. The animation that was present of the actual characters wasn't very good. The effects weren't too bad. The music was okay in certain parts, but I think could have been better. I found the entire flow of the animation to be lacking to front-page standards (although it seems to fit in well with some of the recent front-page submissions, *cough*shapes*cough). I can tell you have talent, but I think you should try to put more detail into the artwork and find a style for yourself.

keepwalking responds:

It was done in paper, I cant manage so much detail. At this point im glad that, at least, my movie could reach the standard digital animation level.

[The W Force - Episode 1]

Has Potential

This series definitely has potential. The voice acting and artwork is awesome, and the animation isn't too bad. Work on the way the characters physically react to their environment more. I hope continue with this series because it definitely has potential.

ImpendingRiot responds:

I will, and I appreciate the criticism. Thank you for the review

[I Am Dateowulf]

Lol

The Beowulf audio wasn't great but the animation was pretty movie. On another note, the movie Beowulf sucked. The poem was much better.

AllenWAwesome responds:

Yes, sadly these days with all this technology, isn't it ironic that the old written word always seems to be much more moving? Oh well. Glad you like the animation.

[[SCRUBS]]

Pretty Cool

This wasn't too bad, the artwork was pretty good and I liked the style of the characters, but the lip-syncing could have been a bit better. Everytime they spoke they were smiling. With li-syncing you need to cater to all the motions, making different sets for different moods, otherwise it will look static and what they're saying won't match with how they look. But, overall, it was pretty cool. And Scrubs is totally awesome. You should've finished the music video for it, it's kind of annoying when people submit unfinished stuff.

MetalDart responds:

Yeah, the lip synching does need to change instead of smiling at the most depressing lyrics.

[Turtle Park Massacre]

Funny, But The Animation...

This is pretty funny, mainly because of the music and the overall ridiculousness of it. The artwork was pretty good (although the grass shouldn't have been flat with the sky right above it, that looked kind of weird), but the animation needs work. Physics is pretty much nonexistant here, along with emotion. Work on making the movements look a bit more realistic, and remember, it's good to have an animation smooth, so it's not choppy, but when it's too smooth it looks unrealistic.

metallica41 responds:

Alright, thanks for the advice.

[Meteor High: Episode 1]

An average comedic Flash animation.

The graphics in general are okay, but they need some tightening up in places. The character models need some work too, you seemed to have done them in a rather lazy fashion.
The voice actors were okay, but could be a hell of a lot better, so that needs work. The sound effects were good though.
The violence, well, the bit of violence in there was good, I guess.
It was kind of funny, the pepper spray part was probably the funniest part. I think the alien isn't a good idea, those kinds of characters in animations are just getting really old now.
Overally, an average comedic Flash.

TheNakedNinja responds:

Nrom has always been a part of the crew, he shall never go away! Without him there wouldn't be a "meteor high"... and beside we don't know he's an alien we think he's our dog.

[NewbieScape 4 Members]

Not To Good

The first thing you need to do for this series is get better voice actors. Once you have acquired these better voice actors write the dialouge... well, better. Most of it was rather small stuff, but get someone whom knows the English language better because the way it is now is kind of irritating to read and listen to. Also, if you are going to scream, please, scream. Don't be afraid to hold the mic back from your mouth and scream, "Nooo!" into it, because when you try to scream in a quiet voice it sounds, well, horrible. The overal audio quality was pretty damn bad, so I think you should mainly focus on that for upcoming episodes. The graphics are bad and the animation is pretty choppy. The humor wasn't bad, but the audio quality and how the dialouge was written really brings it down. Also, I believe you used that "I had a stroke" joke straight from "The Simpsons" and although it is nice to see a continuing joke used throughout a series it isn't as nice when that joke has been stolen (plus, the way the character whom had a stroke sounds bad). I believe I have touched on everything, sorry if it is hard to read, it's 6:00 AM, I haven't slept yet, and I've got something else to do so I'm rather rushing this review. Basically you need better voice actors, better dialouge, better artwork, smoother animation, and huzzah! You'll have a great series. The humor is really brought down by the audio quality, I can't put enough emphasis on that (well I probably could, but...). Good day and I'm looking foward to the next installment in this series.

Lopaxe responds:

i respect to your advises... only 1 thing. Y the hell u spent so much time on this review if ur not going to rate it high? :p