Meh, needs work
I prefer fullbody for comedy (unless it is Stickdeath styled comedy) and I tried to give sticks a chance for comedy, but it just doesn't work. This stick figure would go great in a Stickdeath toon, but this is not Stickdeath. If you are going to use stick figures make them stick together better and well, just use fullbody. It looks better. The audio was okay except for the sound effects and when he screamed, "NO!" If you are going to scream, SCREAM! Don't try to scream in a whisper voice. The gun was very, very bad. It was so spoorly drawn i almost couldn't tell what it was. The animation could be smoother as well. When the stick read the letter, that was pretty funny. But that was the only time a "laugh" actually passed my lips. Work on your graphics and humor.